Rob, I love the first chapter of "Tales & Treasure," I wish THE LOST FOREST was a real book; I feel sure that I would love it. Vatis is a wonderful character; he is real and vulnerable and finding his way. It's very easy for the reader to root for him and walk in his shoes. The opening hooked me instantly, and now I will need to make time to read the rest. One thought, I would love to see more description. You have wonderful travels and places in the story. This reader would liked to see them in his mind's eye. A delight!
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter, and yes I do need to get better with describing the setting. Thanks for the advice. I'm always trying to get a little better
This is an excellent first chapter. Vatis bending over a dying man, feeling not grief or rage but…mild disappointment that he won’t get to finish his story , sets up the character’s motives and personality quite well
Rob, I love the first chapter of "Tales & Treasure," I wish THE LOST FOREST was a real book; I feel sure that I would love it. Vatis is a wonderful character; he is real and vulnerable and finding his way. It's very easy for the reader to root for him and walk in his shoes. The opening hooked me instantly, and now I will need to make time to read the rest. One thought, I would love to see more description. You have wonderful travels and places in the story. This reader would liked to see them in his mind's eye. A delight!
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter, and yes I do need to get better with describing the setting. Thanks for the advice. I'm always trying to get a little better
Rob well done. First chapter in and I want to read more!
Thank you!
Thoroughly enjoyed Vatis the Bard and the start of what primises to be a twisting, fun adventure through a medieval land.
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
A wonderful start to an interesting story! I'm ready for part two!
Thank you for reading!
Finally had a chance to start this, and I am glad I did. Great start!
This is an excellent first chapter. Vatis bending over a dying man, feeling not grief or rage but…mild disappointment that he won’t get to finish his story , sets up the character’s motives and personality quite well
I look forward to continued reading
So happy to have you along for the story!
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This is really good.
Thank you!