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Wow, big curveball at the end, it threw the tone of the story into a 180 degree turn!

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Wow! That ending!!! Okay, I'm hooked!

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Just love it! And then there is that cliffhanger!! “Then the screaming started.”

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Thank you! I learned from the best lol

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LOL!

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